Talk:The Amazing World of Dipper Pines Chapter 1/@comment-24.231.245.132-20120806015734

There are many types of mary sues, dear. If "everyone but Dipper and Mabel hate her", she's merely a sympathetic sue. This fanfiction is dumbing Dipper down, making him out of character, and doing absolutely nothing plot-wise. It's all about your character, and how much Dipper looooooooves her. And yes, you are allowed to dream about self-inserts. We all do it. But the difference between you and most respectable fanfic authors is that, unlike you, they're mature enough to know that kind of shit is supposed to stay in our own imaginations and off the internet. I'm not trying to be a huge bitch or anything (although I'm aware that's what I'm coming off as; I just don't particularly care), but you will never be a capable writer until you stop indulging yourself with terribad self insert fanfiction and instead start getting creative with something that isn't, in its essence, all about you.